Friday, February 29, 2008
Final Destination
The place is spread beyond miles
People live here without smiles
There is no fame, name or shame
No goals to achieve ,no destiny to face
They felt no pain
They know nothing about loss or gain
There is no difference in fate
no fight for difference in right
Nothing in colour all black and white
They lived in peace without fight
They had no reason to laugh out loud
The weather was always calm as cloud
Fun is present in no element here
nobody cried here nobody died here
feelings and emotions were dead before life here
No sign of food here
hunger was nowhere near
no floods no cyclones
they had no language of their own
Then again living was the only reason to live here
Only the chosen reside here
before they realise lifez soo frozen here
people try hard, die hard to reach this place
myth say only the one with good deeds survives the race
to know the right path it would take you lives as much as seven
But let me tell you
People call this place HEAVEN
- KAVEER
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6 comments:
Hey Kaveer,
That was really nice man...never knew you had so much of talent fludding..keep bloggin & keep sending...truely it was mind blowing...
Regards,
Vinay
hmm... its truely great... hope to see more of kaveers artwork posted here... cheers!!
Regards,
Siddharth
Heya,
Awesome one..dono wer u get such beautiful ideas..keep it up buddy...kinda inspirin..wish i meet that angel sometime in my life...
ya got a real wonderful talent...do make utmost use of it..
keep bloggin..gets me real inspired...
tc buddy..u simply rock..
Regards,
Vini
hi,
this poem which u have posted here is really true n very nicely put. my brains just jumpe3d of my head n started screamin "nice one nice one"
keep rockin
regards,
Roger
really very nice kaveer keep it up
Sweet.. Nice one Kaveer.. The smile on my face is still on.. :)
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