Friday, February 29, 2008

Final Destination




The place is spread beyond miles
People live here without smiles

There is no fame, name or shame
No goals to achieve ,no destiny to face

They felt no pain
They know nothing about loss or gain

There is no difference in fate
no fight for difference in right

Nothing in colour all black and white
They lived in peace without fight

They had no reason to laugh out loud
The weather was always calm as cloud

Fun is present in no element here
nobody cried here nobody died here
feelings and emotions were dead before life here

No sign of food here
hunger was nowhere near
no floods no cyclones
they had no language of their own
Then again living was the only reason to live here

Only the chosen reside here
before they realise lifez soo frozen here

people try hard, die hard to reach this place
myth say only the one with good deeds survives the race

to know the right path it would take you lives as much as seven
But let me tell you
People call this place HEAVEN

- KAVEER

6 comments:

Vinay said...

Hey Kaveer,

That was really nice man...never knew you had so much of talent fludding..keep bloggin & keep sending...truely it was mind blowing...

Regards,
Vinay

Siddharth said...

hmm... its truely great... hope to see more of kaveers artwork posted here... cheers!!

Regards,
Siddharth

Vineetha said...

Heya,

Awesome one..dono wer u get such beautiful ideas..keep it up buddy...kinda inspirin..wish i meet that angel sometime in my life...

ya got a real wonderful talent...do make utmost use of it..

keep bloggin..gets me real inspired...

tc buddy..u simply rock..

Regards,
Vini

Roger said...

hi,
this poem which u have posted here is really true n very nicely put. my brains just jumpe3d of my head n started screamin "nice one nice one"

keep rockin
regards,
Roger

Rekha said...

really very nice kaveer keep it up

Vijetha said...

Sweet.. Nice one Kaveer.. The smile on my face is still on.. :)